Beta 3: Takana Apartment Building

(Rules for Beta 3 Below)

1- You must enter the teleporter in the Secret Room in Beta 2 in order to get to Beta 3
2- The first location you enter in the Beta 3 Teleporter is the Makuzah Train Station
3- As you read in the Makuzah Train Station, where you entered Beta 3, your Digimon does not follow you. Just have your character call out, and your Digimon should come out of hidding and appear with you.

Takana Apartment Building

The building is tall, and gray. You see people entering and exiting their apartments. You sense something strange in this location. You look up, and see a suspicious room marked "AP34B." The door is unlike the other doors, as it is made of rotting wood, and has a dark green sign on it, while the other ones have yellow signs.

(NOTE: AP34B is locked until announced)

* Ice enters the apartment building *

Ice is Gasping and wheezing from running all the way from the train station.
"Do you *GASP* think we *Wheeze* lost her renamon?" I asked, slowly regaining my breath.
"Why run from that girl anyway?" Renamon replied.
"You don't remember her?" I said.
"Should I?" Renamon says with a cocky tone in her voice.

I reply to her by saying this, "Renamon... I think that girl might be my sister!"

"Oh look, there's Ice!" Agumon points over to my left. "Hey Ice, what're you doing here?" I ask him. I don't mention anything about my parents, because I want him to stay out of it. At least for now. I wait for him to answer. and I call over to him again, in case he didn't hear me.

I stare at Evan, with fear in my eyes.
Renamon tries to calm me down, but tears form in my eyes.
I flashback to a time where I was younger, and almost right there in front of me, was my sister.
That girl from the the street.

*Hessel enters the building*

I run into the building gasping for air and I yell out of fear and anger: "NO! THIS-THIS CAN'T BE!! WHERE IS HE!?"
"I SAW HIM JUST A MOMENT AGO!! I-I-I think.." I shake my head and run up the stairs. when I almost arrive at the final stair of the stairway, I slip and fall all the way down on my head. Just before I passed out I said with my final strength: "Evan where-where are you" One tear leaks from my eye as soon as I pass out

OOC: you can now bring me to other places if you want to. For now its not godmodding

HAPPY BIRTHDAY EVAN

* Ice hears a banging downstairs *

"Did you hear that Evan? I'll go check it out, just in case it's dangerous." Ice says.

Ice walks partially down the stairs and notices Hessel.

"Evan! Come quick! It's Hessel! And he looks injured!"

Before Evan comes, Ice quickly runs down the stairs and to the exit.

* Ice leaves the apartment building *

As I lay down, unable to move I have dream:
I was walking and walking but I couldn't see anything. I was surrounded by very thick and perfectly white fog. Suddenly, I saw one little piece of the fog that was dark grey. As small as a bug. I walked up to it and I see a shadow of Shinegreymonruinmode. the shadow disappeared just as sudden as it appeared. I saw the darker fog growing. Like it is a virus that corrupted the data. when 'it' was growing I saw a shadow of myself appear. just like the one of Shinegreymonruinmode did. I try to get it away but the fog keeps getting darker and darker. after a while I wasn't surrounded by the white fog anymore. the black fog took over, but I could still see a really small bit of the white fog. it was even smaller then the smallest bug. It was like a little piece of dust. I see the shadow of Evan and Agumon appear. They appeared also just like the previous ones. And I heard a tear falling on the cold rocks. It echoed loudly. and it looked like the tear fell into the white fog letting the white fog grow. It was like a plant I thought first but then I realized it wasn't like that at all. It was my emotion that made it grow. At that time everything became clear to me. The white fog is good and the black fog is evil and for me those were never in a good balance. you need just as much good as evil and control it both or else you will never get stronger. At that time I saw the black and white fight, like they wanted each other just dead. I heard a Ice cold voice saying: "come..." I was hurting so much I fell on the ground. I remembered the voice but I didn't know who it was. at that moment a flashback showed up in my head. When I got to the digital world a digimon showed up with a ice cold voice. with that voice he froze my heart making it pure evil. but he didn't succeed. the little piece of goodness burned again when I met Evan. Now that really everything was clear for me the black and white fog stopped fighting and formed the yin-yang sign. I saw the little dots glowing out of the black one came BlackAgumon and out of the white one came a light. It was like purification. the light shined bright on Blackagumon and he changed into BlackGuilmon (OOC: permission). I BlackGuilmon digivolve to ChaosGallantmon the protector of chaos. He broke me out of my dream.

but I still didn't wake up. The only thing is: I feel happy now even though I have no consciousness on the outside. I have it in the inside. Now I can lay here without all these questions

OOC: ChaosGallantmon was only for the dream. cuz in a dream everything is possible

*Chip entered Takana Apartment Building*

"Hessel! Hessel! Wake up!" Chip said, nudging Hessel, "Are you okay?" He was pretty sure Hessel had been attacked. Keramon started to panic.

OOC: Was that OK? Should I change it?

rguy3 wrote:*Chip entered Takana Apartment Building*

"Hessel! Hessel! Wake up!" Chip said, nudging Hessel, "Are you okay?"

OOC: Was that OK? Should I change it?

OOC: I don't even remember you entering the real world. :/ Did you read the new rules on each section: "Start in the Train Station."

It's still a good post. Just make it deeper. Tell us what your character is thinking. Take other posts for example.

123agumon wrote:

rguy3 wrote:*Chip entered Takana Apartment Building*

"Hessel! Hessel! Wake up!" Chip said, nudging Hessel, "Are you okay?"

OOC: Was that OK? Should I change it?

OOC: I don't even remember you entering the real world. :/ Did you read the new rules on each section: "Start in the Train Station."

It's still a good post. Just make it deeper. Tell us what your character is thinking. Take other posts for example.

Start in the train station? :afraid: Can I do that now, pretending I posted this later?

rguy3 wrote:

123agumon wrote:

rguy3 wrote:*Chip entered Takana Apartment Building*

"Hessel! Hessel! Wake up!" Chip said, nudging Hessel, "Are you okay?"

OOC: Was that OK? Should I change it?

OOC: I don't even remember you entering the real world. :/ Did you read the new rules on each section: "Start in the Train Station."

It's still a good post. Just make it deeper. Tell us what your character is thinking. Take other posts for example.

Start in the train station? :afraid: Can I do that now, pretending I posted this later?

Sure, that's fine. And remember, make posts more in depth. Tell us whats going on in your mind or around you? Like what's your character thinking or feeling. Don't make him lifeless.

* Ice enters the apartment building *

I slowly trudge up the stairs, and finally, I notice Hessel, and Chip beside him.

I walk up to Hessel and kneel down, and Dorumon comes up to me.

I stare at Hessel with cold eyes, but suddenly, I can feel something strange.
I jerk away, and look at Chip strangely, like I never knew him. It is kind of true, I barely met anyone here. I sit down, close my eyes, and try to calm myself down. I think, 'Black and White, like my mom always said, Yin and Yang...'

"ICE!" Chip yelled, angry now. "This is no time for hallucinations, delusions, or mental revelation of any kind! Hessel is hurt! We gotta get him out of here!" He shook Hessel's shoulder, trying to get him up.

OOC: Any better?

OOC: Dude, seriously, be more descriptive, or Evan will use the Ban Hammer.

ON YO FAIS!

"I-Ice..." I say with all my strength, "I-I-I want to join team 16 *I cough* and bri-bring BlackGuilmon to Evan. So if I don't make it, he will be by someone I can trust." My head, that I lifted up a bit, fell down again

"He needs help! Ice, see if there is a water machine somewhere!" Chip commanded, "Keramon!" The digimon looked up. "Stay here." He lowered his head, disappointed.

OOC: If there is something wrong, there is always the edit button.

"You can't tell me what to do." I say, looking up. "I quit your stupid team, remember? I don't even remember saying I want to join."

I stand up, my eyes full of rage, and stare at Chip angrily.

"And Hessel? He can be my replacement for all I care." I say, turning my back.
"Come on Dorumon," I say, "I'm going home."

* Ice leaves the apartment building. *

icefire82G wrote:"You can't tell me what to do." I say, looking up. "I quit your stupid team, remember? I don't even remember saying I want to join."

I stand up, my eyes full of rage, and stare at Chip angrily.

"And Hessel? He can be my replacement for all I care." I say, turning my back.
"Come on Dorumon," I say, "I'm going home."

* Ice leaves the apartment building. *

"Fine! Hessel WILL be your replacement!" Chip shouted after Ice, "If he turns out alright," Chip said, looking down at him in worry.

"Chip..." I say "...Bring BlackGuilmon to Evan please *I cough really bad* and tell him I am joining."
At that moment I knew this was the last time I could say something. I didnt have any strength left...

OOC: I am not dead :p

"I will." Chip said. "Come on, Blackguilmon, I'm taking you to Evan, by order of your tamer,"

*Chip left the Apartment Building*

OOC: Phew! I thought you were.

TheIcyBlade99 wrote:"Chip..." I say "...Bring BlackGuilmon to Evan please *I cough really bad* and tell him I am joining."
At that moment I knew this was the last time I could say something. I didnt have any strength left...

OOC: I am not dead :p

OOC: Um...When did you get BlackGuilmon. I never have seen you get him

123agumon wrote:

TheIcyBlade99 wrote:"Chip..." I say "...Bring BlackGuilmon to Evan please *I cough really bad* and tell him I am joining."
At that moment I knew this was the last time I could say something. I didnt have any strength left...

OOC: I am not dead :p

OOC: Um...When did you get BlackGuilmon. I never have seen you get him

OOC: read my long post on this topic -.-